Lost Young Boys of the Civil War, "senyru" Human Haiku

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By moonlake

Lost Young Boys of the Civil War, "senyru" Human Haiku
Lost Young Boys of the Civil War, "senyru" Human Haiku
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They lay in the field

Lost young boys of the civil war

My young son, my son



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Battle of Shiloh

Dedicated to Peter H Thomason. Lost his life on the fields of Shiloh.

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Deborah Brooks profile image

Deborah Brooks 5 months ago

Those lost boys so sad.. I voted up and beautiful.

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pctechgo Level 2 Commenter 5 months ago

Just thinking about the civil war and how many soldiers perished, most very young and just kids, it's so very very sad. Sad for the mothers of the time to loose in many instances not one son but often two, three, or more.

We (US) have no date/holiday to commemorate them separately. A separate day of recognition outside of veterans day as the civil war was special amongst wars since it was a fight not against a foreign enemy but the US with itself. I have a son who is seven and just thinking that during the era of the civil war in another year or two or three, the army would be looking to pull him into a war. That's insane that it was even morally acceptable during that time.

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moonlake Hub Author 5 months ago

Deborah Brooks,

Thank you, for the vote and thanks so much for stopping by.

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moonlake Hub Author 5 months ago

pctechgo,

Thanks so much for stopping by. It's bad enough we fight in foreign which I understand we have to at times.

To fight against each other how awful that was. Brothers fighting brothers in some cases.

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Hyphenbird Level 8 Commenter 5 months ago

Your tribute to the lost soldiers of the civil way is gorgeous. So many mothers mourned. In our way, we continue the keening because we remember.

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moonlake Hub Author 5 months ago

Hyphenbird,

Thank you and thanks for stopping by.

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writer20 Level 8 Commenter 5 months ago

Great Tribute for those poor young boys losing their lives. Voted up and beautiful

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moonlake Hub Author 5 months ago

writer20,

Thank you for the vote and thank you for stopping by.

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Derdriu Level 8 Commenter 5 months ago

Moonlake, What a compelling, dramatic, tear-tugging, worthy tribute! It's really effective the way in which you manage to convey a wealth of images and actions through the rigid structure of the three-line senry?.

Thank you for sharing, etc.,

Derdriu

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moonlake Hub Author 5 months ago

Derdriu,

Thank you and thanks so much for stopping by. My great great Grandfather went through the loss of this son on the battle field. How awful it must have been for him and to know he had to go home, if he made it home and tell Cassandra her son was gone.

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Cardisa Level 8 Commenter 5 months ago

That was sad and touching.

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Pollyannalana 5 months ago

War...if leaders had to pick up guns and go fight I am sure we would have much less. I live in the south and see many graves of these boys.

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moonlake Hub Author 5 months ago

Cardisa,

Thank you and thanks for stopping by.

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moonlake Hub Author 5 months ago

Pollyannalana,

Thank you, for coming by and leaving a comment.

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Senoritaa Level 6 Commenter 5 months ago

The senryu depicts the grief so aptly. Loved your work.

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moonlake Hub Author 5 months ago

Senoritaa,

Thank you, so glad you liked it. Thanks so much for visitin my hub.

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Gypsy Rose Lee Level 8 Commenter 5 months ago

Such a nice tribute!

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moonlake Hub Author 5 months ago

Gypsy Rose Lee,

Thank you, and thanks for stopping by.

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Levertis Steele Level 6 Commenter 4 months ago

So much packed in a few words

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moonlake Hub Author 4 months ago

Thank you and thanks for stopping by. So many lifes lost back than.

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